

I just need some critiquesI kick off my shoes and lie down. Half dead grass prickles unpleasantly on the back of my neck. I pull my large hood up to cover the exposed skin. It's the first nice day since September; seventy degrees but I'm still wearing a hoodie. I place one arm over my eyes shielding them from the unseasonably bright sun. The other arm rests on my slightly squashy stomach. "Time to start working out for swimsuit season" i mutter to the empty air. My mind lulls through the philosophies of one night stands, cat fights and the meaning of "I love you."I just need some critiques
"Is anybody sitting there?" says a nonentity. the man who doesn't actually exist


ColoradoThe sun doesnt set as deeply here As it dips behind ragged peaks The ridges explode Painting the sky Long after the sun is gone Our skies are bluer than your lovers eyes Deeper and clearer than a Caribbean lagoon The air is clean gently perfumed With vanilla flavored ponerosasColorado


IfIf we waited longer If we tried harder If we met earlier- Later?- If we met when were both married Honeymooning in Barbados If we were 73 and widowed- 79?- If we were cooler- Smarter- Stronger- If you snorted when laughed Or if I cried- Eyes red and puffy In romantic movies If it was all totally different-If
 


temptation in carnateHer unrelenting beauty is cruelly alluring.temptation in carnate
Men turned their heads to watch
The unattainable treasure in red terry cloth shorts. The green stilettos clashed fantastically w/ her bright blue hair She spreads discord as she walks A true scion of Eris She marches on Her pace implacable Progeny of Betty Page One last goddess sent to Earth.
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